i wrote the short story.
i had some hard time finding the true motive to write it at all - a task given at a virtual writers' course is just not an internal motive, for me it is not.
i usually write when i feel i have to.
so, i had some difficulties starting the writing at all and i knew it did not come out that good.
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i received suggestions from my course-mates towards re-composing the story.
i plan to take a good break and rewrite it.
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